Thursday, 25 September 2014

A Wild Day...

Here's a piece of shared writing Room 10 about pyjama day...it was pretty wild!

Yippee time to get dressed for school in my pyjamas! On the way to school I saw lots of bright beautiful pjs. When I got to school just about everyone was wearing their jimjams! Miss Park was a fox! Miss Ovens was a scary dinosaur. Miss Cameron was dressed like a cow. Moooooo. There were lots of animals all chasing each other. Some people were dressed in the same pyjamas as each other like Rose and Amelia! Kyle and Ryan were too. Twins! Lots of people were wearing onesies.

When the teachers were in their onesies we couldn’t even tell who they were. When Miss Park stood up she couldn’t see her tail! Mr Melrose had his pyjama pants on. They were light and dark blue checkered with light and dark grey. He took a photo of Rose and Amelia.  

Oh my gosh! Was that a dinosaur?! Look at its face! Its ok it’s just Miss Ovens. Phew! Wait is she a dinosaur? Maybe she’s a crocodile? We will call her a crocosaur! Shouldn’t she be extinct by now? Especially with that sickly, slimy green colour from the swamp. Look at all those pointy, sharp teeth. They look like miniature saws. Yikes how many teeth has she got?! Wait, where’s her class? I hope she hasn’t eaten them! I hope she doesn’t eat us! Quick hide before she eats us! Is she chasing us? Run away!  Hang on, she’s wearing shoes. That’s not that scary.

Rose was a super cool ninja! Look out she might karate chop us! I hope she doesn’t have any swords. Woah, she just karate chopped the whole playground in half! Her hand must be REALLY sore now! Is it me or does that concrete look split in half to you? She just kicked a tree over! I wonder who she was trained by. Just joking, she hasn’t destroyed the school…yet. But she might be a ninja turtle.

There’s a wild fox in our class…a wild fox that can’t find its tail! She’s got orange fur like the boiling hot sun and a white belly. Speaking of her belly I think I can hear it rumbling! She must be hungry too!  I’m too young to die! Oh no, now she’s prowling around the playground. She might be scouring it for her next dinner. Look, that kid is running for her life! Oh no, she’s turned around and coming for me! Maybe it’s not a fox, maybe she’s an orange werewolf! Or maybe she’s a big giant cat. Either way, you should never trust a fox on pyjama day.


It looks like the ninja, the crocosaur and the fox are working together! Lucky it’s home time; I was so scared of getting eaten! Most terrifying school day ever!!!

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1 comment:

  1. Great story Room 10! Very descriptive, you've got great imaginations.

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